Further Drafting

To develop my drafting further, I looked at the layout of my timeline draft. I did this by cutting out my drawings and arranging them on the table.


This is from previous scamps, this is a good layout as it follows the line well and has a strict grid system

This is a longer rectangular box with a very strict grid. I would prefer it to flow better.

This spiral is interesting as as it is original and unique. I feel that this would be much better with a stricter grid.

This grid is my favourite as it has a grid system as well as flowing well through the timeline.

From this experiment I created this draft